Fury Good Reserve
oipinions on this poem please?
Hallow fear frozen their eyes stair at nothing.
Rigid in final positions their limbs stay.
Salty tears stained upon their cheeks.
Their final words scrawled upon paper for those left behind.
Knowing their souls fate would be eternity in Hell
seemed to be a better eternal fate then their living nightmare.
Ramblings on paper never enough to console
loved ones pain in their search for answers.
Yet if one person had taken time out of their self
centered lives to help they would be better off.
Instead of being marked with
hells fury..... .....
© 2009 Jennifer Dell Bergerson
all rights reserved
( i wrote this for my uncle who comitted suicide)
To the ones who believe that all poems need to rhyme- Not all poems rhyme, I am not a poet that feels rhyming is a nessesity, i feel poetry should be from the heart, and send a feeling the writer is attempting to show.
Touching... There seems to be something very personal about your poem, when it comes from the heart and soul( as does this one) its always a winner=)Deep....The Coach.
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